My listener who asked me to critique his story was gracious enough to allow me to do it via podcast, so that all my listeners could hopefully benefit from it.
It was very cool to have an actual example to analyze. I talk a lot about word choice, and how it relates to theme, and your audience. Also, knowing when to begin the story and when to end it.
Thanks for you help. It's great to have a real professional take a look at a piece to improve it. I'm sure my girlfriend will appreciate your pointers as well on the next one i write for her.
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Thanks for you help. It's great to have a real professional take a look at a piece to improve it. I'm sure my girlfriend will appreciate your pointers as well on the next one i write for her.
Thanks so much
Steve- from Boston