My listener who asked me to critique his story was gracious enough to allow me to do it via podcast, so that all my listeners could hopefully benefit from it.
Here's a link to the show
It was very cool to have an actual example to analyze. I talk a lot about word choice, and how it relates to theme, and your audience. Also, knowing when to begin the story and when to end it.
Here's a link to the show
It was very cool to have an actual example to analyze. I talk a lot about word choice, and how it relates to theme, and your audience. Also, knowing when to begin the story and when to end it.
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Thanks for you help. It's great to have a real professional take a look at a piece to improve it. I'm sure my girlfriend will appreciate your pointers as well on the next one i write for her.
Thanks so much
Steve- from Boston